..chapter three of AWNP..

..chapter three is up!..
..hello there, Ouran Academy!..
..hello reviews… and a critique XD..

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.I know I’m probably overreacting, but I’m not really good with critiques… but I do realize that it’s good for writers… who aren’t so good. XD OKAI… let’s make a few things clear, okai?

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#1 - Seto’s not that insensitive to actually leave his brother all alone in Domino - it’s dangerous. It would have been better if he actually went with Seto.

It would be a lot better too if that critique didn’t sound so menacing D: I mean… doesn’t anybody realize that things happen for a reason - and some authoresses actually PLAN things? Well, whoever said that, I don’t blame you for that. I mean… I don’t appear to be the kind of writer who’d plan ahead, right? I’m just a come-what-may kind of person who writes just for the sake of writing. Yeah. There goes my self-esteem…

If you must know, then Seto didn’t really leave Mokuba. Seriously - I just wrote that line for the humor of it. Things happen in-between, you know. I don’t have to write EVERYTHING just so everything would makes sense - but I guess I should. :/ Thanks to starlight2005, I’ve come up with a good reason why Seto ‘left’ Mokuba back in Domino. I would expound, but that would be revealing the next chapter’s contents. *sulks* I wish you guys would trust me more instead of just assuming that I’m not planning this out the way I should… *grumbles* But then, that’s what I get for being SOOOOO incompetent. XD No hard feelings, ne? 8D

#2 - I’ve written Yami like a total spazz…

Yes. That’s basically it. I know I might have written Yami as a forgetful twit, which doesn’t really apply to what he actually is, but trust me - I didn’t completely mutilate his awesomeness. This story is humor - and humor includes making fun of something. If there’s nothing to make fun of, or if there’s nothing FUNNY at all, then how could I make this humorous? Some of you might be offended by how I’ve written Yami… but please - live with it. I don’t write him like that in all my stories, okay? That’s just how I view him… sure, he may have been the effing Pharaoh of Ancient Egypt and the savior of the world… but who’s to say he isn’t a total spazz in real life? Ya dig? XD I still maintained the kick-ass, arrogant King of Games attitude, didn’t I?

#3 - Seto and Yami living together?! Now that just SCREAMS trouble…

Yeah… but I’m not gonna write anything like that. I just wanted them to be closer to each other, heh, heh, heh… and besides, can you IMAGINE Yami living by himself in Tokyo? NO. I didn’t want him to live with Tamaki - it was sorta tempting, though 8D - so I made Kaiba go ‘BACK OFF, HE’S MINE’. Wait a minute - why am I even talking about this? D:

#4 - When are they gonna meet with the Ouran Hosts?

Probably next chapter.

#5 - …seriously. What do you have planned for Mokuba, hmm?

…Okay, fine. Mokuba won’t be staying at Domino for long. Along with Yuugi, he’ll visit Seto and Yami in a few months. There, ya happy? And Seto won’t be giving all the work to Mokuba - that’s just a cover-up for the press or the media, if ever they ask why Mokuba’s in charge now. XDD LOL No hard feelings! I just… don’t like it when people misunderstand what I’m trying to do. So whoever you are - I hope this clears things up.

#6 - The scene with Anzu and Tamaki was hilarious!

I know, right? XD

#7 - What kind of hosts will Seto and Yami be, then…?

…oh shit. I haven’t thought of what type they’ll be D: OHEMGEE… must plan!

#8 - What are the pairings in this thing, anyway? You’re confusing us with the whole Tamaki x Yami, Kyoya x Yami, … make up your MIND!

OKAY, OKAY! FINE! The main pairing is Seto x Yami! It will be eventual Tamaki x Haruhi! I only added the Tamaki x Yami / Kyoya x Yami ‘coz I NEED IT FOR THE PLOT! NOW PLEASE - have mercy on me D:

#9 - Conflict Tiem? 8D

LOL YEAH CONFLICT TIEM. BUT AM NOT TELLING… well, I have two conflicts. One’s with Seto, and the other one - which leads to the climax and the end of the story - is with Yami. Okie? 8D

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.I guess that’s it then. I really hope this clears things up… and… that people won’t hate me anymoar XD Comments? Suggestions? Clarifications? Please ask me - but in a NICE way, okay? XD We wouldn’t want an argument. Heh, heh, heh! ILU ALL!

..delayed AWNP update..

.this is a delayed forecast.
.err… a delayed update.
.YEAH.

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.I decided to put my feedback / extra notes / anything-else-I-would-like-to-write-but-can’t-write-on-the-fanfic-itself on my blog. Yeah. It’s a very what-the-heck-is-this kinda blog. Whatever. Wahhhhhh… I’m still trying to make it seem… visitable. XDD

.OK! Let’s start… first off…

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#1 You are capable of writing a lemon!! WE WANT A LEMON!!

No. No, no, no, no, no, NO, NO!!! I will not write a lemon!! I can’t write one! I really can’t! I tried to do so once but it ended up being a part of my all-utter-crap collection. Seriously, people. If you want lemons, you can go ask some nearby vendor for some or you can ask more experienced and talented writers to write one for ya. I’ll just end up making you all cry if I write a lemon. So… I’ll spare you the trauma. YEAH. NO. I WON’T MAKE ANY LEMONS, YA HEAR?! I can imagine lemons - LOLOLOL - but I can’t write ‘em. Got it? Are you trying to make me confess or something? D: SHET. You won’t like eet anyways… D: It’ll seem so… so… so-so. XD Wahahhahaah –!! Lalalala… Computer city… Computer City by Perfume (J-Pop girl-band group)… XDD LISTEN TO IT ON YOUTUBE OR SOMETHING. I can’t effing put it in this post ‘coz the file is not supported or something like that. (lulz advertising)

#2 Noo!! We want Seto Kaiba x Yami no Yuugi!! Why are you making it Tamaki x Yami / Kyoya x Yami now?!?!

WHAT THE SHET?!?! OK. HOLD UP. I’m not trying to replace the ULTIMATE PAIRING OF FABULOUSNESS!! NO! I would die before I do that! OK, it’s my fault for not being clear - what I MEANT was that I needed to find the “fake” pairing for a special secret part of the story. Yeah. I need a pairing. I can’t decide between Tamaki and Kyoya - at first I thought Kyoya! but then Tamaki became so charming all of a sudden… - so I thought I’d ask you guys. I’m sorry if I confused you~!!! ^^; I think I still am, though. D: Aww, boo me. In other words, my wonderful people - WHATEVER PAIRING WILL BE CHOSEN, IT WILL NOT OVERSHADOW SETOYAMI AND BE A ROMANTIC PAIRING!! IT’S FOR THE PLOT!! ANYTHING FOR TEHH PLOTSSS!! SetoYami is tehh lulz. Lurk for it. Read it. Watch it. Imagine it. Love it.

#3 I heard you were planning on making this a doujin –!!! How cool is that?!

Well… I guess I could say that I could draw better than the average person - blushes - but I’m not very good. I have to learn how to make a doujinshi first before I start. Heh, heh… but… I think I’ll be able to deliver it better if I drew it. But then again… that’s not necessarily the case… D:

So… umm… What do you think? @_@

Here’s a sample of my super-ugly drawing style. It’s ugly, ain’t it? D: Wahhh… Tamaki looks weird. Yami looks ugly and Yuugi looks like a dwarf — oh wait, I think I got that one right. Hah, hah, hah XDD — AND SHET IT GOT CUT OFF!! D: (Note to self: make oekakis smaller next time –U)

BTW, this is conveniently displayed on the forums.

…but I won’t be really making it until I finish the story. Yeah.I have to finish it first. So if I mysteriously abandon it for some odd reason… lol kidding xDD

SHET. I DREW TAMAKI LIEK A SPAZZ. I WROTE HIM LIKE A SPAZZ. HE IS A SPAZZ. SO WHY AM I COMPLAINING?!

I have a complex. Help.

#4 The story seems boring to me… and a little slow.

Yeah. D: I feel so inferior all of a sudden… umm… I’ll try to make it better. As in SUPER BETTER. PROMISE!

…but I don’t feel better at all D:

#5 Yuugi is… oddly very hyper! @_@ What the hell’s with that, you dork?

-heart gets stab- D…dork…? D:

Whoops. xDD; OHEMGEE I am so sorry about that! I don’t know what came over me… I just… sorta imagined that Yuugi was Hani-senpai. Hmm. Perhaps that new plotbunny was more powerful than I thought…

After the last part of the second chapter, I promise you - Yuugi won’t be hyper ever again! Promise!

#6 AWNP seems like a promising story. I can’t wait for it to become popular~!!

…OK, lulz. Whose post is this? -checks index cards- Umm… ummm.. O-Oh! XD It’s mine. LOL. MINE. Yeah, I really think this story is promising! SERYUSLY. I mean… I’ve only seen -barely read- one YGOxOHSHC crossover and… the pairing didn’t really appeal to me. D: And it hasn’t been updated recently… Owo

Hmm. I know this might seem… uhh, arrogant. But I believe in my story! I just don’t like my writing. LOLz. I mean - it sounds REALLY GOOD IN MY HEAD. You know that? You can imagine it happening! But when you write it —- OOoh boy. Here comes the sucker. YOU CAN’T WRITE IT LIKE HOW YOU IMAGINED IT. SERYUSLY. YES. REALLY. -sigh- Oooh, boy…

Anyways… I hope you guys uhhh… let’s see… support me? I really need support! I might make a sequel —-OHSHETSZ. SPOILAGE.

#7 Your Ouran characters are in-character. The Yu-Gi-Oh characters were okay too, except…

SHET. I DID A GOOD JOB ON THE OURAN CHARACTERS BUT I DID A CRAPPY EFFORT ON YAMI’S PART?!?!? SHEEEEEEEEEET!!!

OK… calm down. -breathes- I am SUPER sorry for making Yami a little OOC. I don’t know why, but I just… like him like that. I know he’s a little girly for anyone’s tastes - except mine, don’tcha know? HELLER~!! - but I really, really, really like him like that. Sooo… if you don’t like it, well…

But I didn’t really make him seem SUPER girly, did I? D: Gahhh… most Prideshipping fanfics out there have Yami be SUPER girly! Why can’t people like my Yami? D:

Gahhh. Hate it. -sulks-

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.Well… that’s it, I guess. I’ll update again when… umm, something crappy better comes into mind. Heh, heh. :3

..new Prideshipping forum..

.I COMMAND YOU ALL TO JOIN. RIGHT NOW.
.I MEAN IT.
.NOW.

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Today is May 03, 2008 at around 10:55 in the evening.

.Big news, everyone! Stranded4Ever - formerly known as Toxic Hathor - created a forum for Prideshippers everywhere! And get this - it’s probably the first forum for the Seto x Yami pair!! Whoooopeeeeeeee~!!

.Inform the uninformed!! Advise the ignorant! Spread the news of the creation of the very first forum for P R I D E S H I P P I N G !!! Weeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!

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F R A G I L E B A L A N C E

.the very best forum on tehh face of the Earth! It will bring you laughter, joy and mirth!.

.obviously, that’s the link to the forum :3.

..submitted Family Matters PROLOGUE..

Family Matters linkage xD

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..open your mouth and say AHH?!..
..life is a termite mound, and we’re just ants :0..

Today is April 29, 2008 at around 12:06 in the morning.

Refer to the title for the purpose of this post. :3

Ughhh!! SERIOUSLY!! I wasn’t supposed to post that until the seventh chapter of AWNP, but noooo –! It mocked me till I couldn’t take it anymore and forced me to publish it! Oh the cruelty of it all! I was tricked - scammed, controlled… MANIPULATED. D: I should just stop bothering — but then again, where’s the fun in that?

Anou… I’m not sure where this story is going. @_@ I haven’t figured out how to write it as planned, coz… I don’t have a plan for it. xDD Umm… help? Suggestions? LOL SERIOUSLY PEOPLE - I NEED GUIDANCE.

LOL GUIDANCE. XD (inside joke)

If this is well-received by the public, I will would definitely make it something deeper and more… profound. I initially wrote it as a crack!fic, but… you know, emotions raging through and all. Think about it — the suspense! How will Yuugi ever react if they found out he had a cynical spirit inside his Millennium Puzzle! The drama — is Hani-senpai being replaced as a cute-loli boy? Or is Mori-senpai being replaced as a cousin?! The suspicion — how will Kaiba react when he finds out that Yami is nowhere near? GASP! The sorrow — WHY CAN’T TAMAKI EVER GET THAT STUPID AUTOGRAPH?!??!? D:<

LOL OKAI, OKAI… I’m rambling. :/ Anyways, if you have any ideas, feel free to spam me with them - whether they’d be super special… errr, cool or so lame it’s cool, JUST TELL ME. WHO KNOWS — I might credit you for them wahhahahhah jk, jk.

Thanks for taking the time to read this post ^o^ COMMENT OR I SHALL SPAM YOU WITH… RANTS ABOUT NOT GETTING COMMENTS D:<

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..yamirachan saves the day!!..
..family matters debut..

Yamira-Chan’s page is a Go-Go

..Why HELLO..
..Feel Free To Spam Me With Questions Regarding My Fanfics..
..But If You Spam Me With Crappy SPAM I Shall Cry..

..This Is Me..
..CELEBRATE..
..For I Have Absolutely NO Talent..

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Today is April 24, 2008 at around 10:40 in the evening.

I created this blog to fully inform my readers the latest news, updates and information about whatever story is being talked about. @_@ I’m not sure if any will even read my posts… let alone visit my blog… but ANYWAYS - feel free to browse. Oh wait. This is the first post. Mwahahhaha. Sorreh.

Oh yeah, I wanna advertise something:

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